It's a good start but it's not ready to be accepted yet. For starters, there is barely any town information in your town hall (missing information such as how to join). You also can't leave the town hall without permission and the buttons being hidden behind the banners make it tough as well. You also need to let your town develop a bit more before you can receive a warp, It's still very small and a lot of things are still being built so try to continue progressing. I also think that your town farm is too small and bland. You should add a bit more variety in the crops and try to add animal pens that the townmembers can use. I hope this feedback helps!